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Michael

I've fallen in love, yet fallen out of lover's choice
How can thou be so dismissive of my love?
One I offered to thee in all earnesty
And thoughts I believed reciprocated for me
Were given to that of another One who does not return the feelings
Of your undeserved, undying plea for love
As a jest, she accepts
In order to remove of your heart
And dance upon it later
Then give it to the one she truly loves
As a token of her favor
and while I pity my love's imminent dismissal
I beseech that that the angels allow hapiness again
For I will no longer pin around
Rushing to aid thee in comfort
Only to have my love find eyes for another
And leave me picking up pieces of a broken heart.

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Region, Country: Philadelphia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Ancientone

18 years 1 month ago

As a name sake....

I am sad for you a bit. But if it was puppy love as you say, then you will get over it soon and move on with more confidence by learning that some folks have a very fickle nature. It is widespread in this country, sadly. You might as well let go when you write a poem such as this, trying to hold back leaves everyone wondering. Give it some pizzaz, please. Then I might critique it more. Have a great day! :) Patrick/AO