Beer !

is reputed to have said that "Beer is living proof that God loves us and wants us to be happy" so perhaps you should have submitted this poem to the Religion vs Atheism contest Cat....I'm sure it would have won hands down (or perhaps bottoms up)lol. He just might have revised his thinking if he had read your bit about it rendering you naked and blushing...but none of the rest of us are likely to be complaining on that score...if we knew your address and what kind of beer you like that is. Keith PS I would have been tempted to say "amber nectar" and left the "of the alcohol" line out.

This came out of you lol I'm not sure if it was meant to be funny or not but I found it so maybe because I am walking around with my head on backwards as of late What if you shortened that one line to It warms me and sustains Chrys

lol But should't the font color be red for blushing or amber for beer? Or better: red before the comma, amber after? Just kidding; enjoyed! :-,?

yip yippy - it''s aLL gOOD hic - up Tihnk I"m Giong ta hvae aonhetr >>>>>>>>>me<<<<<<<<<..........._____------

When I think beer and poetry, it is always Tom T. Hall. But this was nice as well, excuse me now while I seek out some suds!

just saying think about it lol I would remove ; Beer! by:c.m.m. and add to the Title; ! so the title reads; BEER ! Hopefully helpfull, Mark

as we improve upon our work and the new one poem per day system is in effect ;) Mark

Mines a Pint & a J D chaser. Liked it! very good, Peter

Damn I can't even read it straight when I'm sober the trickle down had me staggering lol I wonder why the parentheses though. It works fine without them for me ;) Mark

Clean house once a week. Can't do it without a rack of Heineken - me bad )p Funny thing though, I cannot write haha that started off good lmao I can't write AT ALL rofl with alcohol in me - there ! hope you can get that ( out of there. ::smiles:: Mark

Ya gotta make it a party or bordom will set in and ya find yourself in a mess more difficult to deal with and then procrastination can set in ::sigh:: hate that word ;) Mark

me'd love to party with you, Cat!

Wonderful write and I can't see anyplace to make changes. Here's an interesting little tidbit. St. Arnold is the patron saint of brewmasters. He is credited with having once said, "From man's sweat and God's love, beer came into the world." It goes without saying that the people loved and revered Arnold. Basically because water back then often came from wells too close to the privy and thus was unsafe to drink. *L* Religion and beer, hand in hand! Respectfully, Rett: "Let us then turn this government back into the channel in which the framers of the Constitution originally placed it. " Abraham Lincoln

Yeah for Beer, Tom T. Hall, and alcohal. It all makes me a jolly good fellow. Nice chuckle, good read, and cheers. Well done. Donnie/Sinbad