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Mar 17, 2008
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Embryonic Shadows Continue
so far away
so distant
not even between
a blink of the eyes
can this be seen
so far away
so distant
my heartbeat
so distant
like a star
very faint in the night sky
many light years away
my embryonic moment
timeless
unseen
virginal seed
sets
me free
joined to
my incarnating mind
I climb the Tree of Life
and watch as the snake
sheds its skin
another heart beats
in the distance
so far away
so distant
(C)2008 Lenny Gazbowski
— Lenny of Cohen, Mar 17, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 2 months ago
An interesting piece