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A Strange Fog

On Friday night I saw
a strange fog
rising out of the snow
like steam
'round my work.
I saw,
that particular Friday
gravity in reverse,
the world upside down.
For thirty miles
I drove home in it,
a thin veneer at first
rising around me.
I was covered
I was
reached at
and held onto.
When my wife and I
went out to dinner
we were surrounded.
The sky
was thick like a down comforter.
We were covered,
with no visibility,
she yelling at passerby
speeding 70 miles per hour,
"they'll get themselves killed"
I think to myself.

— Conect11, Mar 17, 2008

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 2 months ago

A Strange Fog

I have a question regarding the ending. Are you combining what your wife yelled with your own simultaneous thought? ~ Ronda
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 2 months ago

made me think of the only

made me think of the only witty and wise thing my father ever said. We were driving through fog at 70mph, to avoid getting hit from behind, and cars were passing us at at least 90mph. He said: They are driving on faith, hope and no clarity. cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

17 years 11 months ago

surreal

i know i always say that, but this one really has the flavor of the otherworldly. you have this talent, to transform the mundane (though this wasn't quite a mundane event) into the fantastic. driving through fog is both pleasant, chilling, and anxiety provoking: i love it. great poem!