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Mar 17, 2008
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Hallucination
Give me life, oh sweet mother
I want to know how it is to live
I want to have a father, and a brother
And have nothing at all to give
So will you give me life?
Will you help me survive?
On this sweet hallucination that I live to bother?
Oh why am I here?
Why did I ever take birth?
Sweet mother, I cannot bear
Life is nothing but a herth
Of a dream, Of hallucination,
Of the misunderstandings, of an imation
Of a lie-betray filled nation
No longer is it, that sweet hallucination
Which I took birth in, where I did my cremation
Greet, Betray, Proceed, Dont stay
Power hungry freaks are ruling away
I will get my sweet dream back someday
I will get it back in my own way
But I just have to understand this world today
I want to have my sweet hallucination, my way
Oh, my mother, my sweet mother
I love the love bestowed by you
But mother, I hither,
Is this the same world? Is this really true?
The sweet hallucination that I dreamt of sometime
The existance of humans, the magic, the crime
Greet, Betray, Proceed, Dont stay
Power hungry freaks are ruling away
I will get my sweet dream back someday
I will get it back in my own way
But I just have to understand this world today
I want to have my sweet hallucination, my way
Oh help me survive, just help me do my part
Help me in my quest, my destination
Just help me keep together the breaking of worlds apart
Help me get back my sweet hallucination...
I want to know how it is to live
I want to have a father, and a brother
And have nothing at all to give
So will you give me life?
Will you help me survive?
On this sweet hallucination that I live to bother?
Oh why am I here?
Why did I ever take birth?
Sweet mother, I cannot bear
Life is nothing but a herth
Of a dream, Of hallucination,
Of the misunderstandings, of an imation
Of a lie-betray filled nation
No longer is it, that sweet hallucination
Which I took birth in, where I did my cremation
Greet, Betray, Proceed, Dont stay
Power hungry freaks are ruling away
I will get my sweet dream back someday
I will get it back in my own way
But I just have to understand this world today
I want to have my sweet hallucination, my way
Oh, my mother, my sweet mother
I love the love bestowed by you
But mother, I hither,
Is this the same world? Is this really true?
The sweet hallucination that I dreamt of sometime
The existance of humans, the magic, the crime
Greet, Betray, Proceed, Dont stay
Power hungry freaks are ruling away
I will get my sweet dream back someday
I will get it back in my own way
But I just have to understand this world today
I want to have my sweet hallucination, my way
Oh help me survive, just help me do my part
Help me in my quest, my destination
Just help me keep together the breaking of worlds apart
Help me get back my sweet hallucination...
— dhruv, Mar 17, 2008
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Critiques
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
A nice song
need some more work on structure.
and bringing home the image.
really good making of a song.