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Goodbye, Forever..
I opened my eyes, to see you there
You said you want me to enjoy life more
I denied, I was in the middle of nowhere
You taught me how it is like to adore
You took me out, You Opened my eyes
You put your hand on my shoulders
You actually made me realize
How nice the world is, how I could see the light
Walking down the street, together
I stopped to pick you up a feather
Didn't realize I'd lose you forever
Yes I will never forgive myself, never
You went on and on, on the street
Looking back at me with much love
I wanted to get you a token
A gift of appreciation, a dove...
I didn't know I'd lose you forever,
I didn't do what I could do
I will never forgive myself, never
I saw death go through to you
There you were on the street
Still smiling, with a scarlet face
You said, "God, yes, we will meet
I want you to live with heart and grace
Until the next life, we will meet"
I didn't know I'd lose you forever
I didn't know what I could do
I will never forgive myself, Never,
I saw death go through to you...
My friend, I just want to say goodbye,
I will love you till the end, forever......
Critiques
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
wonderfully written
great i read it as a song
really enjoyed reading this