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Something About a Man
There’s something about a man that
starts a fire in my eyes
and make me flirt or stare
in wonderment.
There’s a man’s wink or shyness that
makes me wonder what it all means
behind masculine stamina and poise
as he walks away.
There’s something about a man I love that
makes me whole, no matter what ailing
behind this face that pretends not to notice
his advances.
There’s something about a man that
turns a frown on my face into a smile that
heals this lonely heart.
There’s something about a man that
changes the raining in my heart
to a sunshiny day.
There’s something about a man that
bonds my broken heart
mending it slowly with every touch.
There’s something about a man that
makes what I’m going through take
the good with the bad.
There’s something about a man that
makes living in limbo not knowing
where the winds of life will take me
makes me move more carefully.
There’s something about a man
rescuing feminine struggles
that makes my heart rejoice
Living for the moment there is
something about a man I love
that makes me whole
is what I miss when it is all over.
Critiques
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
It’s true, life’s
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks Cat
DarkinAZ
17 years 11 months ago
Nice,
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks Mark
orgami
17 years 11 months ago
Different well
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks