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Mar 18, 2008
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The Poem
If all the wishes
in all the world
could all come true
Then all the girls
in all the worlds
would all look like you
All the birds
in all the lands
would all sing your name
And all the songs
that were then sung
would celebrate the same
So come, give-in
come be with me
let us share a life
Let I to you
and you to me
become, then, my wife
That is the wish
in all the world
that I’d wish come true
That all the girls
in all the worlds
suddenly look like you
And all the birds
across the lands
are singing your name
And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same
And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same.
in all the world
could all come true
Then all the girls
in all the worlds
would all look like you
All the birds
in all the lands
would all sing your name
And all the songs
that were then sung
would celebrate the same
So come, give-in
come be with me
let us share a life
Let I to you
and you to me
become, then, my wife
That is the wish
in all the world
that I’d wish come true
That all the girls
in all the worlds
suddenly look like you
And all the birds
across the lands
are singing your name
And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same
And all the songs
that they sing
celebrate the same.
Comments
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Hello
Jonathan Moore
18 years 1 month ago
I believe the repetition works
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
On the contrary
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
I was afraid of exactly
Calliope
18 years 1 month ago
I do think its pretty