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Subway India

Subway India Michael Lee Johnson Every two to three miles you’re in India again¾ in another subway store in a back room and you will find a recent family camping out there faking fraud visas doing final touch up on work permits and figuring out how to avoid taxes; or get the next boat load over to start a new store. $650 worth of retail sales a day feeds a family of six for a week. Incense ruminate and permeate over and over again, creep out as silk smoke to the front counter area, merges into my spicy Italian sandwich. Daily they work, waiting for work or life to end. They ship back the lifeless bodies to India to float freely in the Ganges River intertwined in memories, hopes, and fears. Relatives congregate on it banks, bathe, place the body on a wooden float, pull twigs and river grass from the river bank, light the fire, incinerate the charcoal, float the body, toss remnants into the river, turn faces down and walk away. The Ganges is a sacred cesspool. Back at the subway store a new day begins. A time tested ritual continues. -2008-
— poetryman, Mar 15, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Heavily influenced by Carl Sandburg, Robert Frost, William Carlos Williams, Irving Layton, Leonard Cohen, and Allen Ginsberg, and Charles Bukowski.

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Mark

Mark

18 years 3 months ago

Rather Brutal

Kept me hanging on every word. A powerful write ! I could see so much happening in this poetry. Mark
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purplemoondoll

18 years 3 months ago

The flow and rhythm drive

The flow and rhythm drive the poem along. The images are crystal clear and kept me there all the way. I read this several times because I didnt want to miss anything - excellent. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Hello

I am sorry, but I think this reads more like a newspaper article than a poem. Albeit an exceptional newspaper article. It was very interesting. Cat
Mark

Mark

18 years 3 months ago

I'm not sure Cat

I see it as a flow of conciousness and I bet the man could go on and on into a book with it. Thare are no rules in poetry unless you make them :) Newspaper Poetry, hey, there ya go ! Mark

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