Sweet Chords And Strings

not sure about the ellipse after wanted, I think for me a comma would have sufficed. The pace works GREAT, especially in the line "seducing me with woven words I felt to be quite daunting." Good stuff. Mark W.

Barbara Writes I see two people finding in this poem. Finding their true love in each other.

Barbara Writes I relate to songs very well. Songs changes the negative emotions in me to a positive when it expresses true feelings of love.

Much like its title, this is lyrical and sweet. Excellent piece, Janice! ~ Ronda

loved the poem..and I feel the same way about some music.. a well done feeling on the page...yes.

There is just something about a man who writes poetry, especially in this day and age. (I'm a sucker for the dark and brooding one, LOL!) Good job. Always, Cat

it's very nicely written and the flow is good- especially enjoy the theme!! Great work! LadyTheresa

To be seduced by a songwriter - boy, have I been there! This was cute and demonstrated the magnet a great song can have on a woman's heart. I envision a country singer -maybe because I noticed you liked country songs..and also the overall tone of the piece. Nice work - this was a delightful read.

Smiles:) Barbara I read it again and it is even better. see the song writer

Smiles:) Barbara I would add Brad Paisley to that list. Alan Jackson Watching Airplanes is the first to be on my new ipod shuttle.

I had to read this one more than once, duhhhh,. LOL some days I am just a daydreamer and your poems seem to take me everywhere...............but I enjoy the trip.