Strength of Character

A great little read about how mentally overwhelming and emotionally awesome, everything can be when we stop and look at things with new eyes. Thanks for sharing this. Always, Cat

all right..you've decided to blow us away today...I love the first verse..the second and the third...in my opinion this is excellently written....a pleasure to read.

Your first stanza tels me that you find your efforts against the vastness of the situation fruitless so much bigger than I your last stanza although I see where you wee going weakens I would suggest ending as you began with an impact nice writing Chrys

I've been working on things here and there this afternoon and needed to clear my head and saw this. It's a good read and I have some very small suggestions in the form of punctuation and emphasis: I am angry at this world of mine. I rail with quiet fire. I scream into the void. My words in vacuum Silent and cold Like space. A dragon. An army of Goliaths. An avalanche already in motion, I know of no way to tame thee To ride this wild wave To break the mustang of my culture My environment. It is all so much bigger than me, All so foreign. My greatest strength is used Merely To maintain myself; It is all I can do. You'd included some punctuation and I placed more where I felt pauses. I also italicized "angry" because that's how it felt to me. I like the flow and pacing. Good work.

have you done slam poetry or poetry readings?The voice fits the theme well. In ink, Dabbler