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Lenny of Cohen
Mar 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Elite ?

a climb down matched by an instant frown eases my pain but only slightly as my eyes drink in the writhing and the pleasure of the elitists gut wrenching sin I know I am tainted so I accept my place glad at least to have someone look at my face I am fortunate to still be in reach of a shadow passing me by (C)2008 Lenny Gazbowski
— Lenny of Cohen, Mar 13, 2008

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Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years 2 months ago

Lenny...

"Judge not lest thee be judged" Elitism is a distorted perception (so is power); a diease in my opinion. from people who think they are better; ask if we are all the same; there can be no better, no worse, just different. I like the short & simple approach Frost
EA

eric ashford

18 years 2 months ago

Yes, I liked this,

Yes, I liked this, especially the last stanza All the best eric