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Mar 14, 2008
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Striving For The Stars
To cry
A goal as virtuous as love
Charity
Or peace
A goal as lonely
As sacrifice
As difficult as the moon
As beautiful as the stars
Like tiny teardrops themselves.
In striving for thee
I miss thee
In achieving thee
I, myself, am missed
O great irony
To weep
To succeed
And to weep
O great irony is man
Sunken in the Earth
Forever denied the stars...
Weep for him.
Comments
Calliope
18 years 1 month ago
Excellent flow .
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
I really enjoyed the flow
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
I think what makes the moon
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
thanks for coming back on
Calliope
18 years 1 month ago
Yes I think ...
orgami
18 years 1 month ago
left turn lane