Solitude

Since you know the novel and what you want this piece to say, I'll only provide you the definition of the word. The simplest is: soliloquy - "the act of talking while or as if alone" (Think Hamlet's "To be or not to be." It's the classic example.) Let me know what you think. I like this piece and find your choice of a title interesting! ~ Ronda

I am not asking "why you are talking of sheep" I am saying...that I understood your goal with this piece. I was helping you to make it more successful by asking inquisitive questions about what seemed to be holes in your poems moral and internal logic. Not what you are referencing or what character it is in honor of. That is a moot point. I have found beauty in each of the pieces I take the time to comment on. But as a workshop, I feel we owe it to one another to inform our peers of holes we find. With all do respect! Please allow others to defend themselves from my comments. I feel like we are all in a classroom and we have to overcome our sensitivity and defensiveness when our work is analyzed by compassionate peers. All of us pushing together down the path of wisdom, not wanting to leave anyone behind. Daniel