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Mar 12, 2008
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Lover's Wasteland (Updated)
He loved the thought of her.
she was born in his mind,
of simple dimensions she was cast.
His life was a lonely climb
from the valleys of his youth,
across the sleeping prairies
of his hunter days.
He followed the call of instinct,
cresting on the tide of
the heat seeking missile of his loins,
through faceless anonymity,
a sea of meaningless encounters
oceans of one night stands.
Giving silent witness to his bachelorhood,
his contemporaries fell by the way,
one by one taken to the marriage bed
fallen soldiers victims of feminine prey.
(And) no one could tell him
that he only loved the thought of her
the image he carried in his head...
— Candlewitch, Mar 12, 2008
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eric ashford
18 years 2 months ago
Some interesting writing
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you Eric,
eric ashford
18 years 2 months ago
Works for me Cat :-) eric
abrelosojos
18 years 2 months ago
Beautifully written. Sorry I
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Gary,
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Carrying a candle
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Keith