You touched my soul

with your smile

I was alone

but now I walk

with head held high

lost in your

ocean blue eyes

Love is more then passion

it is all consuming

when you metamorphosise into one

and you go on that

journey of the inner self

to become one so completely

In heart mind soul and body

No matter how far we fall

into the darkness

of the unknown

we are bound together

in the labyrinth

of the circle of time

— Electric Blue, Mar 08, 2008

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professor

18 years 3 months ago

Love

A simple but touching poem about the powerful effects of love Maggie. Being a biological scientist by day the metamorphosise image did not quite gel because it means changing from one form into another rather than "combining" two into one. You could use "conjugate", "conflate", "coalesce" or "syncretize" etc if you want to be accurate...but i guess you will probably want to stick to your original.lol. Keith

Lonnie

17 years 6 months ago

Well done, Maggie!

Excellently written piece! Love the way it flows together so smoothly and leaves you wanting more!

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

You Touched my sould

Lonnie Well it does leave me wanting more and more as this is all i want from the place it came and still does. electricblue