Temporal People

Yes good images. Are the "that" in stanza 1 L2 and stanza 3 L1 typo's? All the best eric

Liked this one Box!

Yes, just clean it up and it will work very well. All the best eric

Really captured a truth here.[and I do hate when someone's in my personal space]Like really,back up! Lacy, Lol, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

Not many people out there who´re allowed to touch me in any way...what struck me about that one is how your words can be tilted and seen from different points of view...by the way: "more then one" (l.2): is it intentional, or is it a mistyping and should read "than"? As always, with poetic regards, yours, Ink Dragon P.S.: I´ll catch up with the others I missed ASAP!

yes, yes, you already know about "then" in line 2, so I shall move on: simple and honest, that's what I like about your poetry, David, and that's what I like here. It reminds me alot of many in the church, many in my life over the years. And it gives me the same sad melancholy. You say much with little need to draw it out. That's the sign of a wise man. Mark W.

I read bitterness in this poem, but the traits depicted, while not admirable, are too superficial to warrant the bitterness I feel from the poem, makes the whole work seem over-extended... at least to my ears. Perhaps more would help--why such animosity? How do they hurt, either others or themselves, as it stands they just seem insignificant, like flies. Or perhaps that was your point.

Barbara Writes when people get in my space I act out. Stanza 1 and stanza 2 I really relate to and enjoy reading.

you nailed a certain type of people I keep running into but would rather not know. They're bloody hard to deal with or set boundaries too. cheers, Jess