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No Where Land

Yesterday is where I belong

Tomorrow will never be

As my love, will not be there

Waiting for me

To be with my true love

of long ago

This is my one sure thing

For I know he will be there

just waiting for me

 

When once again

we will become one

So alive we will be

 

But all my yesterdays

Will come no more for me

So where do I go

for my forever more

 

I am in limbo

not knowing which way to turn

I am on a journey

I get on here

I get off there

But I belong, no where

 

No one can replace

my one true love

so where do I go

 

All alone am I

in no where land

Is the place

that you will find me

— Electric Blue, Mar 07, 2008

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bayoujeanette

18 years 3 months ago

Maggie

pf long ago.... did you mean of long ago? I like it, however you may want to revisit and see if you can improve some of the flow. Like I get on here I get off there may be you could say: Getting on and off here and there. This area also need some halp with flow. When once again we will become one So alive we will be but that is just my suggestions. I like it as is if that is what you intended.
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LissaMine

17 years 3 months ago

Very Nice Electric

I hope you find your true love again.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

No where land

Lissa Well after my love commited suicide I was totally lost and have been wandering around in the darkness for sometime. But now the light is shinning a little but have to wait and see. Thank you so much for you kind words electricblue
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

i know how you feel/felt maggie

'I am on a journey I get on here I get off there But I belong, no where.... in no where land Is the place that you will find me.' you describe it perfectly love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html