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Mysterious Messiah - Part Two

i am taken
from my mothers womb
to be proudly
paraded in front
of an expectant audience
i do not have any say in the matter
i may just as well be
a show dog at Cruffs

however, my novelty
will soon wear off
and i will become
one more faceless face

my mothers womb was secure
i felt safe
it was safe
now i am to be
one more
vulnerable casualty
on planet Earth

i screamed
so loudly on my arrival
because I hate returning here
this life I want to be my last

no matter
how many messiahs
are sent
to this materialistic hell
nothing ever changes
Intolerances increase
and wars are but a newly created tv soap
so common that
we become immune to this
raging bull of a life

(c)2008 Lenny Gazbowski

 

— Lenny of Cohen, Mar 06, 2008

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bayoujeanette

18 years 3 months ago

Great

I liked this one. I is a very good write.
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 3 months ago

Hi Lenny...

I like the way you write...there is a rawness not everyone can get on paper but you do it so well..this poem is thought provoking, espescially when you have read part one...thanks for sharing with the site..
LC

Lenny of Cohen

18 years 3 months ago

Both

comments are much appreciated. I hope you'll visit the world of Lenny soon! In Peace & Light, LoC