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I like this write. There is geat visulation in the words. I enjoyed reading this write. Thanks, Jeanette

Well thought out although I had to read it a few times to make some of the connections - not sure I got them all even now so i will come back to this later. I liked this - its a little obscure in places- BUT thats a good thing, It makes you read and think. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

This piece stands out for two reasons - it seems simple at first glance, so make sure that it's read more than once. The second time is like following neurons as they spark through the mind before finally coming to rest in a concrete thought. I didn't think I would like when I started reading, by three times it just rolls through the process of natural thought. ~ Ronda Oh, and that does mean that I like it!

this poem reminds me of the reels of video footage i watch on U tube hitting them like a junkie at the slots reading Neopoet poems like a gun shedding shells until only the bright potential of intellect hangs in the air words here i relate too like stones on a footpath O

to me it is about the unentitled human race..or at least the majority.....a thinking poem...loved it.

I read it a couple of times and found it had a deeper impact on the second reading. It is emotionally articulate for a (mostly) one word index. Kudos, Cat

Good Title, but I like The Unentitled better. Always, Cat

Frost So Simple yet so very deep, stirs the imagination, I see several formats, 1 As is 2 Reading line 1,2,3, separately from each verse, Arrogance Vengefulness Activist Homicide Pleaded Convicted Tame Ignorance Righteousness Supremacists Genocide Retreated Restricted Fame Incompetence Pompousness Idealist Nobel Peace Prize Conceded Contradicted Wane Poetic Conundrum, very clever Best Regards Peter

Thanks for a re-asuring reply, at the point of posting, I had slight doubts "Thinking" if this is wrong, WHAT A PLUM, IMHO -GREAT WORK Very Best Regards Peter