Broken

Once my heart beat wild,
and hurt a bit mild.

Now my heat beats mild,
and hurts as if wild!
i have to let you go, my love!

— slybard, Mar 05, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Kampala, Uganda, UGA

Favorite Poets: Jonathan Swift, Sarah Kay, William Shakespeare, Elizabeth Browning, Christina Rossetti, Grace Nichols, The Lantern Meet of Poets (the biggest and oldest society of poets in Uganda)

Critiques

purplemoondoll

18 years 3 months ago

Poignant

and beautifully written. Emotion clearly felt all the way. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

slybard

18 years 3 months ago

thanx

hey thanx Kaz...am already feeling at home here though i just joined a few days ago.

poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

a welcome to you

again you left this one too soon, it is too pretty to cut short Chrys

slybard

18 years 3 months ago

that’s one thing i will

that's one thing i will have to change...