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slybard
slybard
Mar 03, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Untitled verse 2

Must i my Muse tire
with my persistent omission of satire
from all but few of my verses?

She that guides my feeble hand,
and also my frail mind,
to write a great many verses?!

— slybard, Mar 03, 2008

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Region, Country: Kampala, Uganda, UGA

Favorite Poets: Jonathan Swift, Sarah Kay, William Shakespeare, Elizabeth Browning, Christina Rossetti, Grace Nichols, The Lantern Meet of Poets (the biggest and oldest society of poets in Uganda)

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bayoujeanette

18 years 3 months ago

Untitled verse 2

Feeble hand would be a good title. It's good just need to work on the first verse some. Line one and two are not easy to understand.
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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

I concur

The first stanza is a bit difficult to interpret perhaps you can reword it in some way without losing the meaning ah you did it left a poem without a name I doubt your hand is feeble nor is you mind frail not by what i have seen what of My muse and I or my tired muse and I something on those lines Chrys