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Mar 03, 2008
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Blind serenade
In all that words can't tell,
the feelings that we can't quell,
lie a thousand and one sighs.
Am a bird singing in May
but my feathers are in disarray;
never again do I want to bewail
for Fate's exclusion on the love sail.
It could be another tale
of Romeo and Juliet washed down the dale.
— slybard, Mar 03, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years 3 months ago
Welcome to Neopoet
bayoujeanette
18 years 3 months ago
Well done
blistered-pen
17 years 9 months ago
nice