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themoonman
themoonman
Mar 01, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sailing

The age of information,

and just like Columbus,

we are riding on the techno-waves...

       Sailing

 

Responsive to the luxuries,

the spontaneous endearment.

Is there anything you want to know?

anything you need?

faster and more

Sailing

 

Perhaps there is someone else you'ld like to be,

the age of get it now,

and we want it...don't we!

— themoonman, Mar 01, 2008

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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eric ashford

18 years 3 months ago

Good poeming. Tightly

Good poeming. Tightly composed and direct. All the best eric
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eric ashford

18 years 3 months ago

On second thoughts. You

On second thoughts. You could cut the first line starting the work at- Just like Columbus. (just a suggestion) eric
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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

Nice work

What if you compromised and left everything in just rephrased it a bit In the age of information, we are explorers like Columbus work with it and see what you think Chrys
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 3 months ago

Hey...

Looking at it now I see you are both right...I will have to see if I can say it better..thanks for the insights..
Mark

Mark

18 years 3 months ago

Surfing make your own waves

The idea of this is cool. I like the idea of sailing much more than surfing. So many like the cherades but I prefer not to wear a mask (but I do like having fun with avatars) guess it's the creative spirit in me lol Thanks Richard, Mark
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Hello,

I only know what I like, and I like what I see. Very clever. Cat