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Feb 29, 2008
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She is the Night
She is the Night
(by: c.m.m.)
She was deepest night
And she fell all ‘round him
Caressing his body like a silken suit.
Sometimes she was soft as rose petals,
Touching his face with all the ease
And grace of warm springtime.
She was darkest night
And her friend, the moon, had left her,
As, timidly, she came upon him,
Whispering in his ear like rustling leaves
In haunted woods
Where Autumn breaks brisk and laden.
She was deadliest night
And she came hard upon him
Like the calm before the storm
When the wind comes sighing,
Sending him chasing after his hat
While she deliciously laughed
As she and I are one, We are the night!
— Candlewitch, Feb 29, 2008
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eric ashford
18 years 3 months ago
will add my qulified praise
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
She is the Night
Calliope
18 years 3 months ago
Brava!!
Electric Blue
18 years 3 months ago
She is Night
purplemoondoll
18 years 3 months ago
Awesome writing. I like the
poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
My Two Cents
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Thank you Lacy, :) Cat
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Kaz
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Chrys!
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Maggie!
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello eric,
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
No sooner...
TheRealTearsICry
18 years 3 months ago
.
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
:)
abrelosojos
18 years 3 months ago
yeah
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
*
waterdragon
18 years 3 months ago
This is lovely
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Reverend!
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
She Is The Night
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Janice!
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Night predator
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Thanks Keith
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Crisp and even
themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Cat...
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Moonman!
Rob Graber
18 years 3 months ago
“Deepest,”