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Feb 28, 2008
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Candle Dance
Flames we once danced to
hide in shadows of forgotten desires
I slowly reach into warm depths
to re-ignite your wanton fire.
Hypnotic movement from your hips
as liquid forms in pools
sensual aromas hang in wisps
as it permeates the room.
Flickering back and forth,
to the tango of your rhythms
I reach dark corners,
unexplored and once forbidden.
The waning flame exhausts itself
no match for what we've captured,
embers disappear into the night
as we meld into the fire
of our rapture . . . . . . .
— Janice Pearce, Feb 28, 2008
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Critiques
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Very Sensual
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Lady T!
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Raunchy and sensual
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Prof~
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Raunchy?
Calliope
18 years 3 months ago
This was sesual and sexy
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Calliope
Mark
18 years 3 months ago
Woo Hoo
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Candle Dance
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
Candle Dance
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Ronda