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Feb 23, 2008
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Repetend/Smell
With deep breaths, I smell the anticipation of a marathon
thousands lined up and stretching,
waiting for the bang of a gun.
Old race-weary shoes smell of previous struggles
perspiration soaked clothes smell of exhaustion
As my knees buckle, I smell asphalt crushed dreams
Next year I'll try for the sweet smell of victory!
— Janice Pearce, Feb 23, 2008
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 3 months ago
Something about that atmosphere ...
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Dabbler
themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Janice...
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
moonMan
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Smell the most evocative sense
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Prof
barbsdad2003
18 years 3 months ago
Thank you, thank you, thank ...
Janice Pearce
18 years 3 months ago
Thanks Chuck!