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themoonman
themoonman
Feb 22, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Too Far Gone

Turmoil driven

of course its late

old man that I am

 

Father of many

and time after time my own

ruining of self

 

Graciously accepting the end

only its not over

now..I wait, and,

every moment is new.

— themoonman, Feb 22, 2008

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pinksheep

18 years 3 months ago

This poem

uses words that go well together and words I like .The words are not necessarily verbose ,they are clear, crisp and sharp, this poem has a lovely clarity and it flows extremely well.. I like this poem also because the subject of it is very interesting. pink and regards
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Acrostic Art!

I like it very much as I can relate to it. I used to be a speed freak, a very long time ago and I really felt the last line. Thanks for sharing. Cat