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Other then the errors which I will list this is a nice bit of writing use your upper case I common mistake and that is just a typo Please do not use abbreviations this is a poem not a text message u=you just two more letters Chrys

This poem really stuck with me. It reminds me of my brother and my ex and how they are misjudged. They're both great people and I really feel what your saying.

In most cases, I would argue the use of "text speak," i.e. using "u" for "you," but it works for you here. It works because of the implied tone and the matching diction. I won't argue the use of capitalization here because I often break all the rules there, too. As long as it's consistent within a piece, as it is here, I have no problem with it. ~ Ronda