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Feb 20, 2008
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the drug addict
like my first high,its been casted
with a certain amount of
lows ,has my reddened eye seen
like a swoop
to a valley from a high mount
as the skin is hardening and grim
decline awaits, i know,but our first
like the flight of the float of our arms
together.Now the nerves are jittery
with hard substance from the heart,the palms
most sweaty of the body parts,misery
all through the last days,when the calm
head is now violent,the first days were very
much like though the end was one
our hearts lay less caring
— emeka ozurumba, Feb 20, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
Too scattered