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Feb 18, 2008
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In the best of my lies
I caught you in your weakness
putting on that fine honed act
from the corner of always watching eyes
I spotted you gliding
across the floor
in your
"latest from paris" disguise
our eyes never met my dear
i was as you
dressed out
in the best of my lies
under false assumption I came
wearing all the best of my lies
you'd never understand
such perfect madness
as mine,
darkness swells around me
in this place i hide
pardon me have you met my replacement
i finally realized
this is the face
I'll be wearing
for the rest of my time
— atorn, Feb 18, 2008
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themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Z...
atorn
18 years 3 months ago
retort
poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
welcome new poet
Snpdrgon
18 years 3 months ago
Hey Andrew! awesome piece!
atorn
18 years 3 months ago
hey now
Snpdrgon
18 years 3 months ago
*smooch!* Not for this did
atorn
18 years 3 months ago
right back at ya
purplemoondoll
18 years 3 months ago
Welcome to the site
atorn
18 years 3 months ago
thnaks
blistered-pen
18 years 3 months ago
love your title
atorn
18 years 3 months ago
thanks
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Nice!!!
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello!
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18 years 3 months ago
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