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Conect11
Feb 18, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Cleveland Winter Haiku

 Metallic snowflakes large fat Cleveland wintertime breaks my back again
— Conect11, Feb 18, 2008

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

Crikey, I reckon it's too bloody cold

if you can't walk out the back porch in your shorts at dawn to take a piss in mid-winter. Don't reckon I'd do too well in Cleveland. I can almost feel the weight of snow bearing down on me in this. cheers, Jess
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Hello

I lived in Medina Ohio, not too far from Cleveland for awhile. We missed out on the lakefront snow, though. Now I live in Wisconsin. Good haiku, it describes the situation skillfully. Cat
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

splendid!

mostly stayed on my sisters farm, hadn't seen her much for 15 years. Healthy fresh food and air and wonderful company. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 3 months ago

excellent!

I love rural retreats, and am thrilled you got to spend time with your sis. Mark