You Will Never Feel My Tears

Janice, This is very poignant and moving. It transcended me to that place. Thank you for sharing something so deeply moving and personal. I just love it! Kudos!!! Theresa

well written, so tender pink

Janice for me this is by far your best work so far. Absolutely stunning poetry. The emotion expressed left me close to tears and the flow is brilliant. I loved these lines especially:- My tears will never reach to the depth, where you now lay as winter air holds my aching heart at bay. Awesome work my friend. :-) This gets a 5 from me. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

Barbara Writes enjoyed this. Tears falls for our love ones asleep in death, but where they lay our tears won't reach.

Sad, poignant, true. RT

This is an excellent poem sad , so sad written from the heart and that is where most of our best poetry comes from isn't it Chrys

Nicely woven feelings for someone you love, gone to a better place hopefully. Lines 7 & 8, plus last 2 lines are a bit ackward. Nicely done otherwise. :) Patrick/AO

I felt your tears, oh how i felt your tears. How lovely "sad" can be.

puts the reader there...thank you for posting..

I am just getting around to reading this? And to read the comments of Kaz. wow. I am in tears and my favorite part is My tears will never reach to the depth, where you now lay as winter air holds my aching heart at bay. But I think this fits me for someone besides a veteran. Patty