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Feb 14, 2008
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Passions of our Dusk
Older now, we embrace our lives
with creative hearts and
worldly designs of learning.
We hungry eyed artists seeking
sculptors of early yearning,
our passion sweeter than laughter.
attentively clinging
to sun-warmed pearlescent smiles.
In these senior years,
we are creatures of everlasting hope,
secretly longing for the past
days of wild-spirited bliss.
We adventurous lovers all,
dream of expeditions to discover
in the steamy untamed jungles
of our youthful imaginations.
The heady spice scented heat rising
from the vortex of forbidden zones,
while in our minds eye we are
playing tag with the tides
on the sandy beaches of our
desired lover's dreaming!
— Candlewitch, Feb 14, 2008
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Nmolly 49
18 years 2 months ago
Passions of our Dusk
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Max
orgami
18 years 3 months ago
passions of our dusk
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Thank you
professor
18 years 3 months ago
Dreaming with the voice of experience
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
LOL!
purplemoondoll
18 years 3 months ago
We are creatures of
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello Kaz!
poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
Hey Cat
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
:)
themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Hi Cat...
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello (the)moonman!
orgami
18 years 3 months ago
Aging along
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
:)
rpverlaine
18 years 3 months ago
I’m not sure about the
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello rp
drachm
18 years ago
Playing tag with the tides
Candlewitch
18 years ago
Hi drachm