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Feb 14, 2008
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Superficial Christian
I can sit on my hands
look around
once again
in judgement
I
could sit and stare,
shake my head
and just
sit
there.
But what am I,
the hands and the feet
the motion
the action
the compassion
where is it?
Brothers and sisters
at the end of the day?
Or brothers and sisters in arms?
All the things let go
it's the cost of discipleship,
the friendly nods,
the raised eyebrows,
and pleasant disagreements.
I live
a spoiled,
charmed life.
And for this
I have
nothing left
to write about.
— Conect11, Feb 14, 2008
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Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
You know it is uncanny
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 3 months ago
The message
Conect11
18 years 3 months ago
thanks both!