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Valentines

Open your eyes
Open your heart

I opened mine

Just waiting to start

 

I feel it beat

The ferocious beat

With the heat of a million suns

My heart’s for you

 

Open your eyes

Open your heart

I opened mine and I feel yours

Beginning to start

 

I love you so much

I can barely explain

How much effort I put into

Every word I strain

 

Touch your dreams

With the wings of angles

They lower love onto your scene

 

Open your eyes

Open your heart

I am always here

To show you love-

 

Twist your thoughts

Forget every worry

Love can’t be bought

We found it for free

 

And I am always, so strong for you

And I am always, so dependent on you

You give me strength to breathe again

You give my heart a reason to beat and begin

To feel everything I have never felt

I need you to carry on with the burden

Of my love

 

You open your eyes

You open your heart

— washing tears, Feb 14, 2008

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Region, Country: sandusky, ohio, USA

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bayoujeanette

18 years 3 months ago

Valentines

very good I really like the Open your eyes Open your heart...