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Feb 13, 2008
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Postcard from NZedge
Oh my god!
said the city boy in the bush,
what's that noise?
shush
I think I hear...
nothing
(faints)
He rouses slow,
he thinks he's heard
a strange new song,
no, that's a bird
(I'll spare you a Nashian rhyme for that word)
This world is strange
the food has taste
it's grown right here
there is no waste
(not even mine,
eew)
I love it here,
the sense of place,
it's where I was born
but not my own,
anymore.
One thing I regret,
I was not in my adopted land,
on the nation's proudest day,
since the white invasion of 1770,
13th February, 2008
Australia finally said sorry
to the Aboriginal people
for two centuries of
murder, rape, theft and oppression,
it's kind of late,
but also a start.
— weirdelf, Feb 13, 2008
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Critiques
orgami
18 years 3 months ago
Australia
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
Ta O
Rottiestyl
18 years 3 months ago
Now that
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
Rottie!!!!!!! My friend! So great to see you!
barbsdad2003
18 years 3 months ago
Clever ...
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
Ta Chuck
Barbara Writes
18 years 3 months ago
Hadn't heard from you in a while
weirdelf
18 years 3 months ago
Now you know why
RSScheerer
18 years ago
Happens everywhere
weirdelf
18 years ago
One that will never change?