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Postcard from NZedge

 

Oh my god!

said the city boy in the bush,

what's that noise?

shush

I think I hear...

nothing

(faints)

He rouses slow,

he thinks he's heard

a strange new song,

no, that's a bird

(I'll spare you a Nashian rhyme for that word)

 

This world is strange

the food has taste

it's grown right here

there is no waste

(not even mine,

eew)

 

I love it here,

the sense of place,

it's where I was born

but not my own,

anymore.

 

One thing I regret,

I was not in my adopted land,

on the nation's proudest day,

since the white invasion of 1770,

13th February, 2008

Australia finally said sorry

to the Aboriginal people

for two centuries of

murder, rape, theft and oppression,

it's kind of late,

but also a start.

 

— weirdelf, Feb 13, 2008

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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orgami

18 years 3 months ago

Australia

Beautiful poem Weirdelf love it glad to read you again heard something on the Yahoo news about this and CBC all I see now about your Homeland is the new commercials about saving a space for yah or something like that "We"ve turned on the lights" and it shows a fireworks display over Sidney Harbour and I heard that they turned off the lights there at night or something to save power was that true anyway I would love to hear the song of the Cucaburro maybe I'll check it out on U tube again a fine poem O
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

Ta O

Don't know about turning the lights out but will email the Kookaburra song, it really does sound like laughter, when i get home. cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

Rottie!!!!!!! My friend! So great to see you!

and ta for the comment. Can't wait to get home (23/2) so I can get online properly and see what you might have posted lately! I am in NZ on holiday, more rest and renewal really. cheers, Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 3 months ago

Clever ...

ending: first an eminently justified criticism, then a note of hope, as in--- "it’s kind of late, but also a start." I guess the belief of whites in many countries (even nowadays) in white supremacy justifies the idea of "to the victor go the spoils." Seems it's all sort of a religion thing, like, for instance, the animals (define "animals" however one wishes: could be any beings other than Caucasian humans) have been planet-placed for our (read: us Caucasians) use and benefit. And abuse of same for our entertainment. I hope I'm making sense here. Regardless (whether I am or not), your piece, Jess, is by me much appreciated. Thanx, Chuck
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

Ta Chuck

your comments do make sense and are much appreciated. cheers, Jess
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

Now you know why

I am about as East as one can be (NZ), in the country limited access to dial-up back soon. Glad you enjoyed cheers, Jess
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years ago

Happens everywhere

Indians here, Aboriginals there ... all suffering loss at the hands of greed and self-appointed supremacy. It's a battle for every generation and one that will never change, I'm afraid. Are apologies ever enough? One of the things I love most about your work is the fact that you force us to think. Whether we agree with you or not, we think when we are finished reading. It's simply impossible not to. Best, Ronda
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years ago

One that will never change?

It is one of the few things in this nasty old world that seems to me to be getting better, treatment of indigenous peoples by western invaders. Though the exploitation of people elsewhere continues unabated. Apologies are just a start. Thanks for the comments, cheers, Jess