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Paradise of the Dead

 

Early evening's

heavy mist

rolls in

at the crossroads

gateway from

the land of the living

to the nihility

of the dead.

Oh, lucky shade

With the obol

under your tongue,

one sixth of a drachma.

For this paltry fee,

Charon the Ferryman

Will carry thee

across the river Styx;

Drop Ye by the river Lethe

For a refreshing drink

Of sweet oblivious amnesia

To cool and soothe thy brow.

Ye, who died a hero's death,

Travel on to Elysian Fields

With all the blessings

Of the Gods and Goddesses.

Finding truth in the mist

Of the myths of long ago...


— Candlewitch, Feb 12, 2008

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

wow

I see our mutual friend is at it again Cat. Not going to touch this one you know how I feel about Styx excellent writing keep this up Chrys
asiajy

asiajy

18 years 3 months ago

!!!

This is breathtaking. I don't even know who Styx is, but I love the imagery.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 3 months ago

Hello!

Styx is my male alter ego. Sometimes it is good to write from a different perspective. Thank you for your comment on my poem, "Paradise of the Dead." Cat