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what you have till its gone
when a star glitters
and you think
"oh what bright illumination"
and you lay all your night
admiring its beauty
if you knw or not
by morning there will be seen of it
not even a tiny dot
when you see the sun bright
it's beautiful and its light
but if you spend too much time
gazng and caring
than toiling,secretly
that must one day be exposed
at night
the darkness will be imposed
and the sun will be gone
there is secret labour under the sun
in which the toiler both adores the sun
and works,even when sweat starts to burn
he appretiates,but all must not know
for there will be spoilers
or foilers
and for an effortless toil
the sickel
must stay undercover
the stars must somehour go
even if your stare is intent
the dissappeareance
must be blind to your eyes
the sun is long,so so long
but its never long enough
as to stay forever
the night must come
Critiques
bayoujeanette
18 years 3 months ago
what you have till its gone