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barbsdad2003
Feb 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Understand (Senryu)

 

I do see, I do:

I do, I do, I do---no,

I honestly don't.

 

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purplemoondoll

18 years 2 months ago

This made me smile. It could

This made me smile. It could have been taken straight from a heated discussion had with 'the other arf' last night. Brilliant. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 2 months ago

Thanx

As I think is probably evident, I had much too much fun writing this. And then posting it. Yours, Chuck
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Ancientone

18 years 2 months ago

Cute, but...

that's a Senryu, my poet friend. Haikus deal with nature, Senryus with human frailties with a hint of humor/satire which you did have indeed. Call it Senryu and you are good to go. Loved it! :) Patrick/AO
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barbsdad2003

18 years 2 months ago

Thanx ...

for the tip. I knew it was Haiku form ... and not a proper subject for Haiku. Didn't know about Senryu(s). Yours, Chuck
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Ancientone

18 years 2 months ago

Welcome!

:))))
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Rottiestyl

18 years 2 months ago

LOL!

Man! I missed your delightfully playful pen! I just loved THIS!! KM This property Is Protected By Rott and Weiler
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barbsdad2003

18 years 2 months ago

Don't ...

know why, but "Rott and Weiler" remind me of "Rust and Corruption." Delighted you like my playful pen, pencil, brush, quill, Magic Marker. Thanx, Chuck
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 2 months ago

Chuck, As your friend, I

Chuck, As your friend, I just wanted to tell you how smart I think you are! Whimsy on your part looks so effortlessly. Which tells me you put a great deal of thought into your work. Regardless of type or form, your work always makes me smile. Which is an all to rare of a condition. Once again thank you for posting your work. I don't always have the time to comment on your work, I just want you to know that I am an admirer. -DS Baker
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 2 months ago

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Chuck is that a Duck I see walking through snow? If it is...would that make it a cold Duck? Sounds like an interesting name to give to a Ghastly Champagne impersonator...To make it sound more palatable, we could add a French name. All my best! -David