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Feb 07, 2008
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LOVE BECOMES PAIN
LOVE,
LOVE IS BLIND,
LOVE CAN TAK OVE YA MIND.
YA LOVE CAN CONTROL U,
YA LOVE CAN SPLIT U IN 2.
CUZ THE 1 U LOVE ,
MIGHT NOT LOVE U.
THEN THAT SO CALLED LOVE BECOMES
PAIN,
WHEN U HAV PAIN,
U ALWAYS FEELTHE RAIN.
CUZ THE LOVE U THOUGHT WAS TRUE,
DIDN'T REALLY WANT U.
HE WANTED THE MIDDLE OF U,
BUT ONCE U TURN THEM DOWN
THIER FAVORITE WORDS ARE..
WELL THEN B***H F**K U.
BUT IF U OPEN THE DOOR N LET THEM IN,
THE NEXT DAY THEY'LL BE GONE LIKE THE WIND.
THEN THAT SOOO CALLED LOVE BECOMES PAIN...
WRITTEN BY; SHAQUANA
— scooby, Feb 07, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years 4 months ago
what is this
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
"Gangsta" spelling doesn't work
Tragic_Bliss
18 years 3 months ago
if u..
asiajy
18 years 3 months ago
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