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Feb 04, 2008
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I Dream Too
When you look at me what do you see
What's in your face
Or what's inside of me
Every day I stand here to pass the time
Excuse me sir can you spare a dime
I have dreams just like you
This is not what I planned to do
Life has a way of testing our will
All day long seems I'm walking up hill
When you pass me by or turn away
Or have something terrible to say
Remember my friend I was once like you
I had it all planned out
and knew just what to do
Anything can happen just you wait and see
One day sir you may be standing next to me
— One, Feb 04, 2008
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Critiques
poewriter58
18 years 4 months ago
Outstanding
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
I Dream Too
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
Yes, this is an outstanding, human poem.