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I Don't Deserve You
I don’t know what I did
And I don’t know what I will do
I don’t know who I am
Or what I have been
I have no idea where I have been
But I am lost in your eyes again
I don’t know where we could go
And I don’t know how much I could show
I have this feeling inside of me
That’s just waiting to explode
So much love…
It’s hard enough just to breathe
When it’s only you and me
I can’t explain myself
I can’t explain anything at all
All I know
Is that I don’t deserve you at all
You’re so perfect in everyway
And my heart sinks when you say
You love me…
I don’t know how long
I could hold on to your hand
I don’t know how far
I would walk barefoot on frozen land
But for you my love,
I would do it all
So that when you say “I love you”
I know I did something right
I don’t know what I did
And I don’t know what I would do
There’s something more
To every emotion I show you
But I am afraid I cannot explain my love
All I know is that it radiates off of your skin
And when you touch my hand
You make it harder to stand
And when you look in my eyes, Darci
I get lost in the swirl of their beauty
And I have loved you
Since the first time I tasted your lips
I swear I saw sparks
And every moment that I lay in your arms
There is nothing more I could ever want
But I have tried to say
Exactly how I feel
But it never comes out right
And the words don’t seem real
I could tell you I love you
But that doesn’t mean as much as I know I feel
It’s hard enough just to breathe
When it’s only you and me
I can’t explain myself
I can’t explain anything at all
All I know
Is that I don’t deserve you at all
You’re so perfect in everyway
And my heart sinks when you say
You love me…
…anyone can say the words we do, but how many of them mean it the way we do…
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
This is pathetic
washing tears
18 years 4 months ago
i am a guy, and the reason i
weirdelf
18 years 4 months ago
oops, my bad