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Calliope
Feb 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

To Soni :My love i send

All i can say is I love you,

I send it in gold threaded bags,

These magic bags will never spill,

They're always full ,so take your fill,

For though we may be miles apart,

You'll always have love wrapped around your heart,

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 3 months ago

Thoughtful

and I like the bag metaphor. every now and then the poet uses verse to relate to others in sad times to let them know there are words other then sympathic ,to write that is an exercise in communication...the card industry would be challenged to do something different. In ink, David
professor

professor

18 years ago

Prophetic perhaps

Lacy, although I hope the one who it is actually written for both knows and appreciates what has been given. Keith
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Calliope

18 years ago

Perhaps...

Dear professor, perhaps it was a bit prophetic,for I would send this to another loved one as well. Truly, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.