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Brewding Storm

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No one can tell (the difference is)
clear to querying mind(s):
How is it I could not savour
the pungent heavy clouds
before the pulling of the breeze
?

Further afar off, one imagines
future life daily waiting - awash
tranquil staccato whispers -
permeate my porous soul
after the pelting of the rain.

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— crypticbard, Feb 01, 2008

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 4 months ago

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Rhythm, pattern, and pacing I thought were right on. I also enjoyed the subject matter great write!