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Jan 31, 2008
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Melody Online [ Villanelle] Formerly: Poet Teacher
"Listen to your inner voice today."
echoes reverberate in the night,
"Your words have much to say."
Advise from a seasoned poet,
hidden from my sight
"Listen to your inner voice today."
Prose, sestinas, and villanelles
never got my sonnet quite right
"Your words have much to say."
Repetends, anaphoras,
similes , and metaphors, try to make it tight.
"Listen to your inner voice today."
Commas, enjambments, caesura
and end stopped, are my plights
"Your words have much to say."
"Listen to your inner voice, my prot`ege
"Someday you'll reach poetic heights,
"Listen to your inner voice, today,
your words have much to say."
— Janice Pearce, Jan 31, 2008
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Critiques
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
villanelle
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Villanelle
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
looking forward to it
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Melody Online
IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
You may want to switch the freeform to structured
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Melody Online
Barbara Writes
18 years 4 months ago
Enjoyed reading
Janice Pearce
18 years 4 months ago
Villanelle