Private Poses

yeah, you did hit a nerve, sometimes when I'm all by myself I wonder,I enjoy your writing..it's thought provoking

This addresses a real issue, my friend! Good for you for taking it on! Two suggestions, if that's OK? You might want to change "buisness" to "business" in: "Buisness has made it big buisness to know all your buisness." and "knarly" to "gnarly" in "Ok, you have a knarly toe," I like the sarcasm and disdain in this good piece of work very much! Good job! Reverend Bec Hudson Shine Your Light It's the ONLY Way to Get Rid of the Darkness!

Mr Moonman my most fear of fears is that I am so important that I be watched by those of watchee's but you are right my freind and on occasion have smiled my smile but it is here that I reveal my inner bit by bit O P.S. Loved this poem of yours

Moon, I think the Rev. is right. correct your spelling and the piece will flow much better. Other than that, Way to go taking on the "man" like that! Solid thought provoking piece. What part of SC? I am now living in Columbia. All my best! -DS Baker

Should I laugh or be afraid? This is so truthful, and yet scary you did a good job on this one! Loved the ending

I think this is great. A few friends and I were talking and really it seems as though privacy is lost. Quite witty and a great read. Nice title by the way.

I to worry and concern myself to the lack of ones own privacy in todays socity and spelling is a total loss for me too some times But I've order a new mother bord and will have to get a processor and new ram but My works should be able to be save Hard copies will be made very time one is completed or redone now once in the new home If people truely new the capabilities of our goverment and which they had and they have had we would go stark raven mad for they have been up in our bussiness for such a long time only when the need was derived or raised but now it is common place for one reason only $$$$$ the ability to create such wealth as to rival a goverment scares the hell out of those in power and I fear the life styles of the comic books is soon going to become a realality super heros and foes already are here just not yet quite define hence a matter of opinion my soon one day bring down/up such a villian an a Hero Sinbad/Donnie what one does not know can definatly hurt us all

Moonman, I am laughing OUT LOUD at this one...This is a great poem...what a hoot! I cannot TELL you how paranoid I feel sometimes...when withdrawing money at an ATM, knowing I'm being filmed...when I'm (gasp!) in a fitting room or (gulp!) in a public restroom and I'm all worried and looking around for the one-way glass or where the video cameras are hidden...or wondering if I'm live on the web somewhere...thank you for making one of my sick, personal paranoias come to life in your work!!! LOL. Enjoyed this very much!!

It reads like 1984(George Orwell) all over again I do like the last line of this poem it just brings it all home in a neat little package try waving hi to the atm camera sometime. The only issue I take is in using the word secretest I do believe most secret would fit in there nicely what do you think nice bit of writing Chrys

Our modern lifestyle is so far from reality, we're so far from our roots and the things that are still functional for life seem to be replaced sooner or later by something faster. I love this.