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SAKTHEEE2007
Jan 30, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Poverty

Poverty -------   Don'e touch me forever and don't follow me It is my time to recah the peak so don't pull me in to down May be , You were my old friend  I may from your dirty castle  But now I don'd want your proximity  leave me alone myself to move.  A bright paradise calls me to rule  It is my turn to win and swear   Don't touch even my shadow too  My carpet welcomes me to walk  and  my palce with wealth is waiting for me  Get lost my foe!  from my eyes once forall.  

 

a direct conversation of a poet with his poverty

       
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jan 30, 2008

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poewriter58

18 years 4 months ago

And did you win

I like the way you spoke to an object as if it were sitting across from you Palace I may from your dirty castle ---is there a word missing from this sentence perhaps be did you mean reach(second line). you could have left the line don't pull me into down as don't pull me down it would fit into the [pattern better the entire concept is excellent Chrys