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"Awakening Dream"

"Awakening Dream"
 
I awoke to find myself holding new born poems in my arms
Not unlike a parent cradling a child. 
They whispered stories under my chin  
I felt their warm breath on my throat.
 
Each poem a song chanted from before days counting
yearning to be sung once more. 
Full of life straining to be heard in the ears of men, like  
A bull's neck strains when confined in a rodeo chute.
 
They hold their own visions of life as a poem
when Turquoise painted men with red eyes strode across  
snow dusted playas. 
Telling of a time when visions become the reality  
opening and unfolding Lotus  
petals in a mornings garden.
 
Chanting those moments when despair seems to be our soul mate
opening our hearts to Badger's jaws. 
Those are the times when poetry saves  
when it redeems us from having to live in darkness.
 
In-nakedness truth,  
In-truth purity  
In-purity beauty  
In-beauty lies poetry
 
Waking with visions laying on my chest  
telling me life is always in the moment. 
These poems whisper to me  poetry is not defined by rules
Anymore than a sun rise is...
 
For my visions I have paid my sacrifice of blood
Like a Spring time lamb I have been cut away
from my mother earth 
Now able to fly above my native land with Raven's eyes
I see paths taken by the living and the dead.
 
Clutching my visions  
my songs  
my poems to my chest
each a child of my birthing 
Every song has a time to be sung
I await those moments to set them free.
 
-DS Baker

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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

” In nakedness truth , in

" In nakedness truth , in truth etc" excellent reasoning , your comparison of poems and your children is perfect . I have chided many that have written a poem only to give that poem a title of"Untitled" I f you had a child would you not give it a name. Here you have echoed those sentiments. Your poem is beautiful pacing was perfect an your ending was lovely
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meic

18 years 3 months ago

The combination of an

The combination of an overall intimate image [ie chidbirth, nurturing etc] with broader spritual/ritual associations works very well - as if poems have rites of passage guided by you, their maker/guardian. The reasoning is clear and remarkably smoothly developed. A very good read my friend. Mike
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 3 months ago

Thank you

Thank you both! It is rare but I literally dreamed this poem. My wife woke me up out of a dream and told me I was speaking this poem aloud. Luckily I was able to run to my lap-top and jot it down before I forgot what I had been dreaming. There has been little or no editing in this piece. Which for me is rare. Normally a poem of mine starts out like a short story and then gets chopped down to a manageable length. Thank once again for taking the time to read let alone comment on my work. -DS Baker
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 3 months ago

This has a classical power to it

Yet strangely it touches me little. My poems are willothewisps that dance enticingly around my head and more often than not disappear before I get to pen or keyboard. And once written I feel little contact with them, almost like they belong to strangers. It takes all kinds of poets and this site is blessed with most of them. cheers, Jess
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 3 months ago

Dreams can be important...

Its ok, Jess. My poetry is not for everyone. I don't know if it is the Celt in me or not, but I have had prescient dreams on and off most of my life. I take dreams very seriously. One dream that stands out that I had-I was standing around a 3/4 size Swiss style Chalet home in the middle of a wooded area. The men and I were all wearing combat fatigues and eating what appeared to be a catered lunch. We had all slung our M-16's across our back and had the most serious looks on our faces as we ate. Six months later I had joined the US Army. A month after joining I was standing around what is called a "Range Shack" that looked like a 3/4 size Swiss Chalet, eating chow before going back to training on my 105mm Mortar... All the best! -DS Baker