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frangipangi
Jan 28, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Haiku

Lovely spread lady Touch her innocent beauty Kiss her crystal dew  
— frangipangi, Jan 28, 2008
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cricket

18 years 5 months ago

nice

Very nice imagery.. you have done well poet..cricket
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frangipangi

18 years 5 months ago

smile

Why thank you Cricket. I am humbled with a smile. Yours, Frangipangi
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frangipangi

18 years 5 months ago

Senryu

Hi Box, Thank you. My attempt at Senryu. Yours, Fran
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frangipangi

18 years 5 months ago

Senryu

Hi Box, Thank you. My attempt at Senryu. After the storm rages, some erotica emerges. Just sometimes. Yours, Fran
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frangipangi

18 years 5 months ago

no title

yeah, box you are correct. Traditionally no title. But I think you must put something in the title box to post, so I put Haiku. I have a wonderful site that explains Senryu. Here is the site if you want to check it out: http://www.geraldengland.org.uk/ge/gepm002.htm good to chat with you Box. Yours, Fran
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

Nicely visual as good senryu

Nicely visual as good senryu should be. I enjoyed the erotic theme. I often used linked pieces [though I deliberately don't call them haiku or senryu] e.g. ONLY HUMAN http://www.neopoet.com/node/5363 Mike

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